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Keep Hydrated by psivamp Keep Hydrated by psivamp
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this is a revision

beautiful model is =kristyvictoria

This can't be done, I know there's still problems, I've just fixed *some* of them. point out the rest!

If you point out a problem with the picture, explain what it *should* look like and if you are capable of doing so tell me *how* to fix it.
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UYFANYM Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Just thought I would let you know that this is the superior of the two by far. The effect of the glass is realistic and it looks better over all. The only thing I would have done differently would be taking away some of the highlighting on the face. IMO it is just a little too bright. Not really a flaw of any kind just something I would have done differently.
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onejumpjohnny Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008  Professional Photographer
very unique, interesting and beautiful portfolio work :winner: I'm pleased that you like my stuff :bow: Thank you for stopping by.
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SLJones-photo Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2007
Absolutely gorgeous work. Wonderful concept as well.
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psivamp Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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freedomsignal Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2006
Strong visual image of with the fish and aquatic plant life; its a comparison of the bodies system of organs with a a small ecosystem; that's pretty cool
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psivamp Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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jeffdearl Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2006
well the only thing I can critique about is the fish and sea weed need more details for the realizim but that only takes time, and I think that your efforts would be better spent in doing new works. the vision of this piece has been portrade quite effectivly. beautiful concept and water fisk tank effect. simply (although nothing about your work I find simple) stunning, as always
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psivamp Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much!!! :heart:
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Fooflemay Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2006
i definitely like her arm better this way. i didn't see that she was clear until you pointed it out. it could be just the way I was looking at it. have you tried a lighter background? i don't know what color, creamy light color, to emphasize the inside of the back of her and it might help give more of a contrast. but definitely something with color since the gal is so pale. the black just seems to detract to me - i really have to concentrate to see it correctly. again...it's probably just me...you definitley have the shading down though and it's a wonderful idea! very imaginative!
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for the wonderfully detailed comment :hug: will work on the background some more at a later time.
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SidelongGlance Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2006
It's great, but the wrinkles across her torso make it look (to me) more like an image painted on fabric. Is there any way to make it look a little more reflective, or smoother?

The girl looks awesome, though. :D
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
ill work on it, thanks for pointing it out :)
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Lemarc Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2006
very attractive.
what can i say more=)
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you <3
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gohtence Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2006
Perfection at it's finest.... amazing work!
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
<3 its not perfection yet, i still see problems but im glad no one else seems to be able to
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aeravi Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006
that totally works! love it! :)
(i like how her eyes match, too)
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! <3
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SuperDoe Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006
I like it. :) I think it's an improvment over the last. The position of the arm/hand is better.
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! I still have a few things im notici9ng myself to change though
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saradotcom Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006
That's fabulous, I love the way she is standing, and I especially love the design on her...clothing? Yeah. Definately :+fav:-ing it. =) Awesome job.
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
its not supposed to be a design but that her midriff is actually glass filled with water
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saradotcom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2006
Well, the design you -put- on her. I kind of got that, sort of, but I didn't know how else to say it..yeah..
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ okies
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UYFANYM Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
you did everything right. :+fav: all the way. well done :blowkiss:!
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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0-Akasha-0 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006  Professional General Artist
oooh cool :D the arm definitely works like that
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
oh good :) thank you
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turnip-girl Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006
Gorgeous work!
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psivamp Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!
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